Make it bleed.

It was short but you got the point across. i understand what you mean in this, and you expressed quite well. i thought it was nicely done. 5/5

Short. Simple. Slightly cliche... Loved it. ;)

Short. Simple. Slightly cliche... Loved it. ;)

Love it,short and to the point 5/5

~Amber~

I think this poem is really good...its short but has alot of meaning behind it..its like you can feel the pain as your reading it....maybe you should add on to it and as you add continue in stanzas..but great poem...5/5

~michelle~