The poem flowed really well, the emotion's laced through it where strong completly known emotions.
I love how your so sure of your feelings and how things would turn out if he came to you.
Well done,
Elaine.

Very good poem ,well done!

Wow, i thought this was a great poem

i loved the rhyming and the flow

was great

not alot people describe it in

this way

i thought it was great

a well deserved, 5/5

I have so had this happen before. Very good nice emotions and descriptions. I love it. 5/5

Awww i really liked it that was full of meaning yet so short :)

Amazing!I could feel the emotion in it.5/5

I thought this was beautifully written...so much emotion and depth in a relatively short piece, flow was good throughout and I enjoyed the ending.

O WoW i cant belive how much i can relate to this when it comes to my ex...
come back to me,
not to her.

i will do anything,
my heart is broken and your my cure

My Fav. Lines ^^^^You are amazing at what you do!

Wow i can so relate to this....really powerful emotions..5/5

I really like the sructure of this poem. I do suggest capitilizing your I's. The flow here was really nice though. 5/5

marcella

Your passion flows freely,, keep writing

Very nice, i liked it. simple, with good format. the message was great, it got me

your servant:
atticus

I really like it. the flow is a little off at some places, but over all i really like the rhyming.

I really like this...it was beautifully written your emotions just pour out of it...the message was great. keep it up!

MickeysBabyGurl

Very beautiful, I really liked this poem a lot. What sometimes disappoints me are the grammatical errors and oversights because I feel they sometimes detract from what you're trying to convey, because you have such a way with expressing your feeling. Still a good piece!

Beautiful. you expressed your feelings, amazinly throughout the poem, but it was simple and easy to read. Relitivly short, but really good!! 5/5

Well.. .the emotions are genuine.. i wud just like them to show a little more.. ur poem is a lil lacking in expression and description.. but keep workin. ur on the right track :)

Gosh lol another wonderful write!!! keep up the great writting!!

<3 i love you silly