I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS. Actually, it would make an amazing country song. I love the whole country theme, it's rare in a lot of poetry now a days I find. The flow was amazing, and I could see everything perfectly.
Krys, after reading this poem, I just had to leave you a comment. This poem was beautiful! It wasn't cliched like most love poems are and I can tell that it came straight from your heart. I have my own country boy, so reading this made me feel pride and I laughed, knowing someone else out there felt the same way. The flow was great and I liked the rhyme scheme. My favorite line jsut had to be :"I've fallin' head over cowgirl boots" That just made me smile and I got a great image. Once again, great use of words and the imagery was awesome!
Keep it up!
That was really cute! i love it! and i think just abt everyone loves a country boy! lol well good poem..
13 years ago
by Tara Kay
I am glad your writer's block has gone, and this poem was absolutely brilliant!
I thought it was sweet, cute and shows love and happiness. This guy sounds really cool, someone everyone hopes to meet.
You are very talented.