Redemption [Lento]

by Andrew Morton   Jul 15, 2007


Relenquishing everyone of your sins
finishing everything you have begun
fishing for the lies that lay within
singing a song thats already sung

redemption of what you've done wrong
execeptions given to all but you
predictions made of whats to come
connections created between power and you

losing the cards that you were delt
everything that you held in your hands
feeling lost in everything you felt
finding reason in all that you can

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem ANDREW very well written and some what different from your normal writing,love the word choice you used wonderful job,, your friend Tracy d,,,,,5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Another wonderful poem, and yet again i loved the style. fantastic job, i look forward to seeing your new works.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very powerfully worded poem. The lexis used in this piece are very strong and appropriate. I loved the nice rhymes and the style. It is well structured and flowing well. 5/5 all the way

    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    Of all your poems I've read this ones is my favorite. I love it... especially the line about losing the cards you were dealt... it's just a great line with great imagery... nice work! :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Andrew
    You are becoming very good with your formed poems :)

    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

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