The Man For Me

by debbylyn   Jul 16, 2007


Wanted:

A man to love forever more
First of all a friend
Sense of humor is a must
Trustworthy to the end

Must be handy round the house
And also very clever
A gourmet chef to cook for me
And tardy almost never

Must remember birthdays
And keep a tidy lawn
Hang upon my every word
Send flowers just because

Please include a photograph
If you enjoyed this jingle
Must look a little like Brad Pitt
Or thank you, I'll stay single!

*written for a club challenge

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  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Hahahaha very funny! My only true suggestion was to not use the word tidy twice so close together, and lawn and because didn't really rhyme, but close enough to make it cute...I thought this whole piece had a good flow to it, and was truly funny!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Lmaooo that was so cute Debbie!

    Please include a photograph
    If you enjoyed this jingle
    Must look a little like Brad Pitt
    Or thank you, I'll stay single
    ^^^^
    Loved this part ... whooohooo awesome write sweets

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "Please include a photograph
    If you enjoyed this jingle
    Must look a little like Brad Pitt
    Or thank you, I'll stay single!"

    Lmao! I loved it! Sorry guys, Brad Pitt can take you all on!! hehe
    Gorgeous little ditty!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow what an interesting poem...reflecting the qualities of your ideal man!! :)

    The whole poem is poetic and the fun element is also present. Very nice 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is so cute. I haven't read a delightful, humorous poem for weeks. So it's a worthwhile read, definitely. :] I wish you good luck with your search! Lol.

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