by Linda Jul 17, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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"We'll be together forever." |
by Just Lucy
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I didn't really catch the rythm in it, I couldn't quite feel the flow, it was a good message sent out though but yeah it needs a bit of work |
by sheila
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I love it |
by Bloomed Rose
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I loved it. like Haley Austin said, love the rythm. good |
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Good rhyming! |
by Linda
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Please comment. |