Eros' favorite game

I like it. I think it was very original and unique. Great job 5/5

At first, I kind of recognized the title 'Eros' and when I read it, thats when it hit me. So anyway, the concept was great but I think you need to tighten up the lines little bit. But indeed this is a good piece.

Wow. i have never read a poem on cupid be4 and be4 i read the bottom bit i didn't know what ero meant. but now i feel stupid. i liked the concept of this poem it was so true and it had a lot of meaning. great work. 5/5

This is a good poem i stil think that your other one was better but it was still good...i do think that you could write longer poems thou i mean just let the words flow out of you it seems as if you are holding yourself back a lil bit..

I love Greek Mythology so this definitly caught my eye when I read the title. The flow was spot on and the word choice was well picked out. Using Eros instead of the basic cupid was creative. Well done on this.~mel