Drifting

by Brittany Hampson   Jul 20, 2007


Your moving away from me,
when i try to pull you back,
you move farther away,
the farther you move,
the more i need you...

Thinking of losing you,
just brings tears to my eyes,
i love you so much,
but you keep moving away.....

Your friends are before us,
we are falling apart,
but I'm trying to keep us together....

Why is it when i give my heart away,
i lose that person to,
Death, moving, or not wanting to be together...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I can really relate to this piece (in fact I have a poem titled 'And Always I Dream Alone' which expresses almost the same mood and meaning expressed in the last stanza of this poem). This really captures the sadness and despair of losing someone. The emotion is so powerful in this. A touching piece very well written.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow...sadly i can really relate to this poem. i hope you feel better though. good job, its a poem of emotion and question. great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Sad and deep.
    Very good piece of writing.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Why is it when i give my heart away,
    i loss that person to,

    um. is loss supposed to be lose?

    this is good.. =D great job 5/5

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