A Message From My Heart

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jul 20, 2007


Here I stand again
My heart in my hand
It's 2 a.m. and I'm awake
But my heart slips like sand

I'm treading just to feel a touch
Or to hear a loving word from you
I want to feel your beautiful eyes
Watch my heart pour out before you

It's been a long time I've felt like this
But tonight, is the night I feel I must
I want you to think of me every second
Before this turns into ravage dust

My heart yearns for yours to bind
To connect each others soul as one
Because there is no one else on earth
Who's beauty can easily match the sun

I want to hear you agree on forever
That's what my heart is set upon
Just let me know what you can see
And don't let this night be gone

I know you know I can feel this
That's why I want to be here
I want your arms around mine
For our lips to be painfully near

*Note* Ok ...so really...I wrote this at 2 in the a.m., and writing can usually help me sleep with ease. I've just been tossing and turning for hours with this girl on my mind, so any ways to improve this poem would be useful!! Thanks to you all!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    When i have heaps of thoughts on my mind i can never sleep either, it gets annoying sometimes lol
    this was well written for being written so early in the morning and it shows emotion
    great job keep up the good work
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very original... First stanza is interesting (I wrote few of mine poems at 2 or 3 a.m. too) I usually really don't like this type of poems but this one has great atmosphere. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i loved this whole piece. i loved the concept of it, the words you use. it was a delight to read this. great work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    I like this one....full of love...beautifully written....you can feel love in every written line....i ove it!:)5/5...Your friend... *Melody*:)