Stuck Here Awhile

by aDORKable x3   Jul 20, 2007


Written 5/30/07
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A month ago baby, I couldn't believe
That someone like you would like someone like me.
But now, look at us, how happy we've become.
No longer just two, we've become one.

Your smile, infectious, brightens up my day,
I smile as I listen to the words that you say.
Your hands hold me tight; please don't let go.
I look in your eyes and I know that you know.

It's the little things you do that keep me close -
You're the one I care about the most.
Your eyes, your laugh, your lovely smile,
I guess now I'll be Stuck Here Awhile.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    This is so perfect! I love the line where you said, "i know that you know." that was so cute and so emotional because it's the truth in any good relationship, you know what the other person is thinking. It's the joy of really knowing someone so intimatel that they can't hide anything from you. :)
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Rhyming isn't unique. This poem isn't original and you could wrote this piece much better. First stanza isn't good. Second is little better and the last one is greatest but rhyming in that third stanza is poor. 3/5 Sorry... That is just my opinion, I really like your other poems more.

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Wow...Amazing...I loved this...It was so short and real cute...

    But now, look at us, how happy we've become.
    No longer just two, we've become one.

    ^ Those were my favorite lines...

    Keep Writting...5/5...

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