Conditions of Love

by Corruption   Jul 20, 2007


His heart,
swells greatly,
at the mention of her name.

His mind,
bursts with thoughts,
of how we will meet.

His nerves,
tickles with electricity,
from the seduction of her voice.

His fingers,
speed across the keyboard,
to reply to her message.

**hehe i think i like this poem.... but still pllzz comment truly :):)**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Awesome poem alot of emotion i see
    good job

    ashleigh

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Aha. Another cute piece, but amusing as hell. :) Best wishes! Hehe.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Short and Sweet great combo!!! Like lol a waffle cone and soft serve ice cream lmao.. You've got talent;) Talk to you later Keenan.

    Beck

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    Wow keenan, i really liked this poem. You said so much, in such little words. I loved it alot, it's really great. Plus it's different from the rest of your poems, it was really good! I think it was great!!

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