Startled by Her (Etheree)

by Corruption   Jul 21, 2007


1. Bang!
2. Shocking,
3. Beautiful.
4. Dazzled by her.
5. Amazed by light,
6. The light from her beauty.
7. But there is more then her looks.
8. Her being is foreign to me,
9. Her personality is unique.
10. Im baffled by her day in and day out.

**etheree is a poem that consists of 10 lines scheming from one syllable all the way up to ten syllables per line or it can be done from 10 to one**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Connor

    Good job mann great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Etheree's are my favorite poetry form.
    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Awesome style of pem and just as good as the last
    good job

    ashleigh

  • 18 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Hehe awww i loved it keekee! sounds like ur in love! hehe

  • 18 years ago

    by Debbie

    That's very, very cute. Falling in Love is one of the most wonderful feelings--no, no, it's the most wonderful feeling you'll ever feel in this lifetime and beyond, and it nevertheless brings you back to your own real self. It's a gift, and the gift of love is [in] nature. Cherish it for ever, m'dear. You 'banged' me with a piece of work which I could thoroughly correlate with myself. :]

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