Where is God?

by Marius Laun   Jul 23, 2007


As I fall
to a pit of despair,
I know God
He doesn't care.

Now is the time
I need him the most,
But he's up and vanished,
Just like a ghost

If he cared
he'd send a sign,
That I'm not alone
and left behind.

And as the light leaves me
and darkness enshrouds
The quiet peace is gone,
and the sorrow is loud

So now I wait
for a timely demise.
I pray I will see god,
When he cries

So I know he cared
but couldn't help me,
For a greater good will come
That I soon will see.

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  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    I liked this one but some of the rhyming seem sort of forced.. but other than that it was really enjoyable to read!!! keep it up! :o]

  • 16 years ago

    by Yvonne

    Wow! Good poem. The flow is good and the passion is right there! It has so much emotion that you can feel it all the way through the poem. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    The message was evidently a fact and I agree with every word said.

    Now is the time
    I need him the most,
    But he's up and vanished,
    Just like a ghost

    I liked this part because I think I can relate to it pretty much.

    This is a well written piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like last stanza. This poem is amazing. Topic and message of this piece are great. It is unique and excellently written.
    Well done! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    This was a great piece of art, the flow to this one was flawless just like the rhymes. You did a fantastic job, yet I would like to mention that you should place punctuation in your work, i find that...poetry without punctuation is like a song without a melody. I have learned that on this site, I hope my advice is of any help. I think that you are a great writer, keep writing!

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