End of Life

by Twisted Heart   Jul 23, 2007


On the edge of surrender
Cascades the fountains of infinite light
Tempered with hunger
Streams whip away into the night.
Heart's flutter pulsing
Thunder beats in strained breath
Age tarnishes freedom
For sweet pleas of rest.

Mercy stained wreckage
On tempered flames of desire
Breaks of mere heartache
Transcend on ashes tainted and tired
Come searching the mind
From depths too dark to be seen
Thumping grows weary
From the cries inside as they scream

The perilous journey
For the soul now to awake
Comes tender release
From the feel of each breath as it breaks
A shadow of comfort
In tears formed that fall in the night
Rests silent the heart
From the struggle of life

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ajmal

    Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    This is awesome. The imagery and word choices are perfect. Such a sad piece.

    The perilous journey
    For the soul now to awake
    Comes tender release
    From the feel of each breath as it breaks
    A shadow of comfort
    In tears formed that fall in the night
    Rests silent the heart
    From the struggle of life

    Very heartfelt.
    Excellent job my friend.
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Very very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Great work very good language use xxxxx well done xxxx