by Run out of words Jul 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
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It's something I've never felt before, |
by Shauna
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Great Work!! |
by x Mo x
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In the second stanza it was a bit weird how you rhymed perfect with itself. But perfect is a hard word to rhyme with. And the second to last stanza kinda didnt seem to fit, I mean the idea of it did, but the rhythm and the way it was written didnt. |
by Sourav
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Very emoional poem with touch of sadness... Nicely written... Keep writing! |