MY HEART BEATS PAINFULLY BLEEDING OUT FOR YOU

by CEE CEE   Jul 25, 2007


My heart beats painfully bleeding out for you
Im burning on the inside and my soul is damn near through
Through of being taken and abused ever so badly
Through of being so loving and getting tossed away like nasty candy

My heart beats painfully bleeding out for you
Im burning on the inside and my soul is damn near through
Through of being gentle and sweet and then taken advantage
Through of being loyal and true then in return getting damaged

My heart beats painfully bleeding out for you
because the moment you said its over my heart broke into two
Im burning on the inside and my soul is damn near through
because you mistreated it to the point where it just can no longer be soothed
I gave you my heart and along with it came my soul
and you used it against me now its my tears i cant control

So my heart beats painfully bleeding out for you
and im burning on the inside and my soul is damn near through
I loved you more then anything I gave you my world and more
and this is how you treat me leaving my heart bruised and sore
you said you didnt want to hurt me, that in you I'd find love
but instead I found the opposite pain is what you gave up
you told me that it'll be ok......it'll be ok to trust you
but here i am picking up pieces of my heart that belonged to you

My heart beats painfully bleeding out for you
you were the one who had my love but now our love is through
Im burning on the inside i cant control the pain
but i am going get over this, im going stay on top of the game
you showed me what i don't want
i showed you what you need
you gave me strength and courage but i gave you my everything
all i wanted was your quality time because you never spent time wit me
i never got that time unless it was before we went to sleep
but i wasn't tripping because i loved you
and i wanted to give you my all

now my heart beats painfully because we let our relationship fall
my soul has lost control of what to do in life
but with my friends and GOD im gonna be alright
so im goin to cry now and im going forgive you later because im not the one to hold grudges
u dont know what your missing out on because i know i got the best lovin!

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiveMyLifeOnALullaby

    Great poem!
    I could feel the emotion! Loved it. And the repetition gave it more depth. Keep it up!
    -C.P.-

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Good!

    For this one,I love title very much, For the entire piece, You really describe your concept well, but I don't see edgy parts or lines it, but the one thing that is great on it is the message on it!

    Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Great poem.I could really feel your emotions in it.A few grammer mistakes,but you could fix that up in a heartbeat.

    "My heart beats painfully bleeding out for you
    Im burning on the inside and my soul is damn near through
    Through of being gentle and sweet and then taken advantage
    Through of being loyal and true then in return getting damaged"

    That is my favorite part of the poem. :)

    Keep writing,
    Miranda

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Well done ! I loved the repitition because it really got your message through. The poem was deep and the language used was stricking. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Wow...You should really put this in stanzas, and use more puncuation..It would be pretty awesome...Keep writting though....