A Story.

by Miu   Jul 25, 2007


Dark winter night,
Cold crawling inside.
Moon doesn't shine so bright.
A Night for desperate people appears.
A night that fades slowly away.

A Girl next to her bed, standing.
Her head is a mess - desicion she made,
Taking her short life away.
Screaming in anger, crying in pain.
Same time laughing over everything she ever said.

Hand shaking, gun pointed to her head.
Last words inside she said.
A tear running down her innocent face,
Last one that will fall.
A shot, Deadly silence comes in.
There hasn't been seen as quiet night for years.
But She got all she wanted.
No emotions in her face will ever appear again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    This was soo good to read, great and moving stuff!!!
    5/5
    - ali x x x

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Wow that was kinda happy ina weird way.

  • 16 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Eeeek. Great poem! It got straight to the point, which I don't usually like so much, but the way you did it wasn't too bad.

    Corrections:
    [There {haven't been} seen as quiet night for years.
    But She got all she wanted.
    No emotions in her face will ever {appeare} again. ]
    {haven't} should be {hasn't}
    {appeare} should be {appear}

    The flow was ok, not great, but not horrible. Again, I wanted to know what this girl was thinking and why she did what she did. Since we don't know what happened in her life, we can only guess at what's happening. Good write. =) 4/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 16 years ago

    by Megamidget3

    Wow, great poem! really powerful! 5/5 just WOW

  • 16 years ago

    by sheila

    Amazing poem

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