Strawberry Rain

by Angie   Jul 27, 2007


Strawberry Rain

walking through the flower garden
as the sun glows hot and pink
bumble bees and dragon flies
a colorful sight is what I think

surrounding this painted beauty
creating a peaceful haven
oak trees stretching towards the sky
water, their leaves are cravin

looking upwards I do see
clouds full and slightly gray
seems a storm may be brewing
on this glorious summer's day

blue birds sing while they bathe
at the fountain in the middle
brown bushy tailed squirrels dance
as thunder booms just a little

sitting under the gazebo
when it begins to rain
drops as fat as a strawberry
fall upon the garden lane

once the storm passes over
the fruity colors are all aglow
magic blooms in this sweet garden
as once again, walking, I do go

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow!!! You wrote this one beautifully... Incredible piece! You described beauty of nature amazingly. Imagery is superb! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Beautiful poem.
    Very imagery.
    Great word choice.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Dear, what a wonderful of nature you portrait here.... how i needed..... you choice the word like a butterfly, flying and flying....my pleasure to read your penned, beautiful done!

  • 16 years ago

    by collin

    Wow you bring everything to life with vivid detail and complete imagery truly a great poem it takes you on a journey and at the end you feel refreshed kee up the good work and kudos on a great write

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    That was very lovely imagery, i love the tittles of your poems there so magical fantasic poem my dear u captured nature xox sam

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