My Love For you [Acrostic]

You are the perfect for me
on the sky we will fly free
unless I die, this is my love for you
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I really liked these lines. This poem is written very well. I loved it. Keep up the great work 5/5

Aww the wording of this poem is great, all your poems have nice emotion and feeling
xx

Second stanza is superbly written. It has amazingly atmosphere.
real love shows that you are my boo
^I don't like this line. Rest of this poem is great. 5/5

Hassan, what a Acrostic poems you penned here, so lovely yet heartfelt write, flow well within beautiful expressed emotions, like a sung you sang.... My pleasure to read your work...keep them coming, and thanks for your nice comment.. have a good day, Best wishes.

NIce Acrostic, besides the rule, you have written it in a good flow. I can see some bit of descriptive grammar being used, thats a point I want to explain to all poets that WE as poets have the POETIC LICENCE to change words, alter grammar and so on.

For instance in the line"every words makes you feel great" words is ungrammatical in prescriptive sense and it must be word, but due to poetic licence we can still write words. So I really appreciate that :)

Tc
Fsams