Beautiful dream

by travis   Jul 30, 2007


A beautiful dream only comes once in a life time
it consumes you to go for it
and never stops consuming your thoughts

it makes you feel like thats all you need to live
as you grasp on for fulfillment and love
life would not be complete without it

as this dream feels further and further away
it seems impossible
as it seems that you have left their heart

but believe in that beautiful dream
and consume it with all your heart
as you never know what you might do with it

as your dream continues into the night
and into the day
never forget it as it may be what saves you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    This is great..dreams are a beautiful thing. never let go of them!
    i especailly love the last line:
    "never forget it as it may be what saves you"
    that's very powerful.
    great work here!
    oh i'd also like to take the opportunity to welcome you to the site. hope you enjoy it here!
    and keep writting. =]
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by sheila

    Love it great job keep it up!=]

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    Baby.. see youre such a good writter.. nvr ever dout yourself ever!!
    i beleive in you.. and the comments prove that you can do anything!!
    i miss you like crazy.. and i soo proud of you!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    This is a really good poem.. i liked the way your words flow into your emotions so well! Your a talented writter and i hope to read some more of your poems soon...if you have time you should go and read a couple of my latest poems...i would love to know what you think....thanks and keep writting...

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    OOO what a meaningful poem, very deep yet it left a lot of room for interpertation too i think...anyway great poem especially for your first ^_^

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