One girl and one boy

by travis   Jul 30, 2007


One girl and one boy
never thought this would happen to them
never thought they would meet
never thought it would feel like it did

when that first kiss hit their lips
when that first caress of each others hands meet
when that first night came with them together
when that first magical moment happened

they never thought it would be like this
they never thought it would become this real
they never thought it would be a lifelong dream
they never thought it would become a distant memory

as love hit their hearts
as love hit their sole
as love hit their bodies
as love hit their memories

one girl and one boy were lost in love
and nothing can change the way they feel
as they both know
that one boy and one girl can become one.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    This was a pretty good peice. COnsidering that your just starting out!
    Your flow was off, but the emotion expressed was pure love :)
    Great job
    And welcome to the site
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Aww! how beautiful. seems like you have a really strong love for the one you were writing this about, yet it somehow still maintains to be universal...great job! ^_^

    *^*crow*^*

  • 16 years ago

    by travis

    I know but i thought it may be a interesting thing to try

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    Hey kaila whats up girl??
    lol shes right very good.. and i love the repitition though.. i think it brings the poem its meaning
    <3ang

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I like the repitition but its almost too much
    so tone it down a bit
    but its great for your first write!
    nice work
    4/5
    kaila

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