Stranded love

by tears i cry   Jul 31, 2007


We laughed together
we smiled once or twice
we shared the good times
and we feared the bad ones
you loved me
i loved you
we were happy together
just me and you
till she came along
tore us apart
you left me stranded
with a broken heart
i didn't know what to do
although were still friends
i know we can never
be together again
i remember when we laughed
i remember when we smiled
i remember the times
that we shared
i remember the day
you told me you loved me
i remember the day
i told you i loved you
and i remember
when she came along
she tore us apart
and you left me stranded
with a broken heart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Love can be sweet and bitter. I really understand you feel.. Poem very beautifully written.

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Realy beautiful well done, again its nice flow and simple words but show how deep feeling inside, i know how its hurt and i know that all girls cant forget anything happend specialy things about love,5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very good write. You've showed your emotions beautifully in this poem. I could almost feel exactly how you felt as I read this. The flow was good, and the word choice was great. The concept was beautiful as well... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by khate

    Its such a really nice poem,love can be the greatest thing and it can also be the worst thing,i really love it,.

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Its funny are greatest ability is are worst enemy emotions sometimes can be so fickle - raindrops 5/5

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