Late At Night

by Dark Reaper   Jul 31, 2007


Sitting alone with so many words to say.
But all I can do is watch the day fade away.
The words to be said never to come to the one I love.

The day goes into a sleepless night.
The moon rises up the stars take flight.

The eyes of the one I love watching form above.
Feeling the gaze unable to sleep.
The feelings I feel are getting to deep.

The depth that I feel is to much to take.
The love that I feel can never be fake.

Where does everything go?
Why am I all alone.
All I can do is sit and stare at the phone.

The one in the mirror says to be strong. And the other wants to run away when everything goes wrong.

(Written by: Livin in a lonely hell and Dark Reaper)

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  • 16 years ago

    by YouKeepMeFromFallingApart

    Still jealous.
    Like majorly.
    :]
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jason

    Ok look i am going to be completely honest... the poem was good the structure bad.. if you want to catch peoples attention you have to fix your structure.. you need stanzas and lines what you have is a paragraph that rhymes(sp?) . i give it a 4/5 cause it was good but yeah like i said it needs to be put more into a poem form

  • 16 years ago

    by CEE CEE

    WOW I LOVED IT I UNDERSTAND YOUR EMOTION AND IT COMES FROM YOU HEART GREAT POEM 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    This is oretty good.
    I think you need to work on the structure though.
    Your flow was kindof overpowering, but other than that it was a good poem.
    great job!
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    I love this one I know for a fact that it does have true feelings and emotion every word was meant for real
    i totally give it a 5/5
    one of the best i think
    its amazing what you can think of at 5 am lol
    well great poem. You have TALENT . =]

    laura

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