Slave to Life

by BrokenREALiTy   Jul 31, 2007


Life's rain is pouring down on you,
As you're drowning in yourself on land.
Your mind pulls you to the brink of sanity,
Look around (no one understands).
Spend your years looking for yourself,
When you're already really here.
Though, look through the image in the mirror,
And you're really over there.
Run away screaming with bemused delight,
When existence attempts your death.
Hold the knife of your own blood before you;
Will you go against what life has set?
Escape and yet you're still a prisoner;
Yet you still don't feel the slightest free.
Wandering among an empty road road ahead of you,
Squandering: "Who is truly me?"
Attempting to separate the duplicates of true,
From the mystifying dreams; a falsity.
Stranded between two copies of what really is,
When both are reality.
(You're a slave to life...)
©O7232O07 Mindy Huang

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  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Different but good. good job

    your servant:
    david

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    I really loved the way you ended this and I LOVED the content. It was a real eye-opener piece.
    God I love you lol.
    Keep it up. :)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Nice write. The poem itself is akin to an excitable rant of emotional steam. It reminds me of a confused someone, yet is still able to think properly, especially in difficult circumstances. The pitch and rhythm set off vigorous pace throughout, which is seemingly forceful; and the emotions raw and well versed. An interesting read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice
    it was really good
    the flow needs some work
    but it was a deep message
    nice job

  • 16 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    Beautiful