My Wish...

by Nice Guys Finish Last   Aug 1, 2007


Two years ago, unbearable time
Grab the knife with both hands

Placed it against my wrist, pressed down to grant my wish
Without my will, the blade fell to the floor and not a drop of blood was spilled

Again i tried, thought i was going out of my mind
A tighter grip this time

Then the voice spoke and I awoke

Sweat dripping down my forehead,
No blood on the ground, all safe and sound.

Was it a dream? or a vision of the future?

What i can say is this, mold yourself like clay into the way you want to be seen even if others don't come clean.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    Great poem..i really like it

  • 16 years ago

    by SeXiSaMi

    That was an amazing poem.. wow im speechless, honestly. that was so well done.. and the turn in the poem that happened was kind of shocking to me.. i didnt really expect it, but i liked the twist of you ending up waking up.. great job! keep it up!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HisBlueEyedAngel

    I like it. It just seems real but it could be

  • 16 years ago

    by danielle

    Dang dude this is really good it was really good but scary at the same time keep up the good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Wow...that was really good and actually kinda hurt =P Very good meaning in it and one that I think most of us need to realize =P 5/5 And a little to truthful =P
    Rhea

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