Ventriloquist (Acrostic/Rondel Hybrid)

by Bryan   Aug 2, 2007


Violins play in the background sweet melodies
Everyone dances, not a sad soul in sight
No sorrow lingers, happiness fills the night
Times stands still, everyone is in tranquility
Reminiscing on these enchanting memories
In-secluded love fills the room tonight
Laughing and talking, so easy to see
Over the disguise for-shown in the light
Questions still linger, no guarantees
Unanswered heartaches giving a fight
Instantly the clouds begin to recite
Showing the magic under the mist
This is the sorrowed life of a ventriloquist

a style that i thought would be cool, it uses the rondel rhyme scheme ABBAABABABBAA, and spells out a word or sentence like the acrostic style, hope yall like it!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Nice acrostic!! =] I love your choice of words =) It makes it even more beautiful. What else should I say about it =] Oh yeah, I loved the beginning, because there was so much positivity in it =)

    5/5

    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bryan
    Awesome job! Loved the imagery. You really shine on all the poetry forms.
    ~CLAP~CLAP~
    Take Care Cindy