Society

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Aug 3, 2007


Bury me deep,
Burn me high,
Prick me with words,
Watch me die.

Cripple up like a dead dream,
Watch me go to my knees,
Nothing stays the same,
And watch the world freeze.

Act like a sl_t,
And the guys will love you,
Pops out a unwanted baby,
After a few.

Smoke a joint,
Watch the smoke go out of your nose,
You start to feel high,
And there your life goes.

Look at that pretty thing,
Stick it in your pocket,
You get yourself caught,
Deputy shuts the cell door and locks it.

You say he's worthless,
And you watch him cry,
He thought he should end the pain,
So he chose to die.

You act like your something big,
You act like you have it all,
When people find out about the lies,
You start to feel small.

Stop being a bad influence,
To the community,
Be who you want to be,
Because nows an opportunity.

[I tried writing a poem about society and here it is. I'm surprised it actually rhymed! =] Comment&Vote please! ]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Myke Roeschlein

    I definately like how you were straight up about how ignorant people are. Keep it up.

    Comment/vote back .:)

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i don't know what to say. it is unbelievably true. it was honest and i just loved it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    *nods head*
    So true, so true.
    It's terrifying what society is becoming these days, isn't it? :[
    The poem was wonderful. The flow was good, the vocabulary was great, && the meaning behind it was amazing. Lovely job. 5.5 Keep writing.

    - Stephyy <3