My One Wish

by Atrum Dominatio Donum ut is Letalis of Regnum   Aug 3, 2007


Lamenting in depression,
Thinking just of you,
Reflecting on your purity,
Reflecting on your love,
I'm unable to free my mind of you,
Nor be it my desire to,
I have but 1 wish in life,
And my one wish be this;

For my heart, soul and mind,
To belong exclusively to you.

As this has been fulfilled,
The rest of my wish may follow on,
My greatest desire be this;

To be forever in your love,
And for you, to be forever in mine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I like this poem very much. You expressed emotions greatly and it is very interesting. I don't like the last two lines but rest of this poem is excellent.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    It holds so much emotions, but again, it is too typical for my taste. I like love poems with exquisite wording (like your last one) or with some metaphors. This is just my opinion... I mean, the poem is not bad, it's just not my taste, so I won't rate it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Raven

    O......M.....G
    I am inlove with this poem for many reasons lol.
    It very cute and you show alot of emotion.
    Lucky person to whoever has your love :)

    5/5

    ~Mz.Raven

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    HI davE,

    ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Honestly speaking, I love the style of your writings, and there is a better outlook...

    Nazeer

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