Hold On...If You Feel Like Letting Go

by Wake   Aug 4, 2007


For the sake of the memories,
greet the open wounds , let them bleed.
And as you grasp for air in the dark,
i'll slowly let you free.

So you can breathe this open air
as much as you want till tonight,
'Cause when these clouds sing again ,
we'll be taking our last ride.

I know the waters never deep enough
to drown all your sorrows in.
So let the raindrops fall all down
and fill it up again.

We'll dive in as one
you'll never come to know
what hit you ... so hold on
if you feel like letting go . . .

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Written by Wake

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Nice flow and word choice.

    " I know the waters never deep enough
    to drown all your sorrows in.
    So let the raindrops fall all down
    and fill it up again. "

    My favourite stanza, really great.
    Really enjoyed reading it.
    Love your work.
    Take care