BROKEN DREAMS

by Bree   Aug 4, 2007


Broken dreams,
Dark green eyes,
Broken dreams,
She slowly dies,
Broken dreams,
Suicide,
Broken dreams,
She cried and cried,
Broken dreams,
Memories gone,
Broken dreams,
For far too long....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shadow Heart

    I like it!, it's nice!

    5/5!

    kyra

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I think u used broken dreams too many times you could have evolved your poem if you had replaced those but i loved your poem and that was my own personal opinion just trying to help 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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