Short poem...

by Catie   Aug 4, 2007


My hand in yours.Finger tips over mine.Everything in this moment feels so fine.

Your arms go around me--I can feel your heart pounding..

Your lips touch mine as our souls intertwine..

My knees go weak as you begin to speak the words that make my heart skip a beat.

So I'll say it again as I said b4 there's just no way I could love you any more.

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  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i loved it, it was beautiful. the way you expressed it was truly amazing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    The last line is a bit hard to understand at its beginning. But the thought is well presented. Nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Good start you got there...i could feel the love and the descriptions were nice. Just make sure you proofread cause in the last line it looks like a word is missing or miss spelled. Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    It was short and beautiful. You conveyed the message along greatly. It was really nice.

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