My poem my riddle.

by damont   Aug 5, 2007


I wait till the day of dancing and final goodbyes
to see the glitter sparkle in her eyes
that will only last until she realize and her joy dies
all thats left is the pain shed and a weight lifting itself
she gave to gravity a portion of her life
no longer can i look into her stife
baring the weight as time seems to tell
i was forced to cature and remove all which i known was the well
finally piercing the essence of her memory
feeling the words a deaf man can't hear but also feel
as time slowed down for the few who were fare
and it seemed the background was so fast nothing was there
i spoken sofely in her ear, words that made her shiver
the floor moved as we shared this moment
a pleasure unspoken but words were formed but couldn't escape
the soul of us were lost in a frame
blinded by the light as we looked who to blame
time no longer seemed to care
for in this matter we return to the darkness as i dared
we were at a place which was loved and hated at the same time
where wars were common but we fell into our own minds
as we swapped thoughts and a pleasure returned for its last journey home
she went into the place where love and hate coexist
all this hasn't happened yet but doesn't mean it won't exist.

this is a poem and a riddle
to those who do not understand it's only a poem
to those who think it becomes a riddle
and to those who figure out the answer to the riddle its a story. lol try and figure out whats taking place if you can not i will tell you.
try and read a poets riddle revealed. its another poem i wrote specifically for this poem.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Haha cute

    i like this line very much though: "she gave to gravity a portion of her life "

    *^*crow*^*

  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Okay, wow. confusing. I mean...it's all there...I read it I understand the words...But then it seems like something else all together. Like a fable or something. Nicely done. I hope this is the one you meant for me to read...cause you have a couple here n all. soo... Yeah. good job!

    Happy writing.
    Hannah-

  • 16 years ago

    by captured heart

    This is such a soulful poem lol you put so much emotion into it that every time i read it i would put myself in the situation...great poem, its a TEN!!! lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Hey great poem
    i like the other one i read better though
    but this is good too
    your poems could use some punctuation
    like comas at the spots where you want us to take in what youve written and stuff it makes the poem look nicer
    and it is easier to get the flow
    well good job enjoyed it lots and thx again again for the comments

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    A beautifully flowing poem. great job