Rose of Darkness

WOW! i love it!....i like how you can take something so simple such as a rose and turn it into something so dark and full of emotion.. great job! 5/5

This was a fantastic poem. I loved how you wrapped it all arounda rose. . . TALENT. 5/5

Nicely done. I find the thought of gauging a person's purity to determine whether he is worthy of living or not rather fascinating, and worth further notice as well. The descriptions portrayed was divinely vivid and the tone of voice emotive and well articulated. I truly enjoyed this piece, Amber.

Wow this one is absolutely powerful from the title up until to its own content,it has deep meaning though i can't really adopt the hidden meaning in it..Nice description too. anyway, Keep up the good work!

I liked this, although there were a few mistakes.
I liked the way you turned the whole idea of a rose on its head and made it quite deadly. Your descriptions were very vivid in parts of the poem also.
On the third line though, it should be "quite."
Also, you have many homophone errors concerning "you're" and "your." You're is used when shortening down you are, and your is used when something is belonging to. A way to tell if you're using the correct one is to see if you are would work in that sentance...For example (taking a couple of lines from your poem) "as you are life fades" doesn't make sense, however "if you are clean" does. Hope that helped without offending you.
Keep writing.