Broken Hearted Tragedy((SONG))

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Nov 11, 2008


[VERSE 1]
She can feel her heart breaking,bleeding in her chest.
She stares up at the ceiling as tears keep her from rest.
The clock's ticking down the time until his verdict is read.
So she lies wide awake in her cold,empy bed.

And the moon shines through the window glistening off her face.
She wishes she could've been there to prevent his mistakes.
But,she understands that perfection is out of reach.
She closes her eyes and to the Lord beseeched...

[CHORUS]
God,it's me again and the pain is getting worse.
I need you to help me through this world's curse.
Mistakes have been made for it's the humans way to sin.
But,I feel so hopeless and broken within.
Lord,I know you can hear me and feel my agony.
Please help me escape this broken hearted tragedy.

[VERSE 2]
He was up all night with those thoughts in his head,
Feeling like his heart had been shot full of lead.
He didn't know what to do and was feeling so confused.
To believe that everything was alright he simply refused.

The stars shone bright as he gazed through the glass,
Wishing he could go back and reshape his shattered past.
Luck was never on his side,evil clung like a leech,
Sucking happiness dry and to the Lord he beseeched...

[CHORUS]
God,it's me again and the pain is getting worse.
I need you to help me through this world's curse.
Mistakes have been made for it's the humans way to sin.
But,I feel so hopeless and broken within.
Lord,I know you can hear me and feel my agony.
Please help me escape this broken hearted tragedy.

[BRIDGE]
Praying for forgiveness and a second chance at life.
Sorrow so thick and choked down with strife.
Their tears flowed freely for once in a while,
Getting ready for this brutal world's trial.

[CHORUS]
God,it's us again and the pain is getting worse.
We need you to help us through this world's curse.
Mistakes have been made for it's the humans way to sin.
But,We feel so hopeless and broken within.
Lord,We know you can hear us and feel our agony.
Please help us escape this broken hearted tragedy.

-Copyright-Amber Palmer

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  • 17 years ago

    by CalebxXxPoet With A PurposexXx

    I loved it Ambo it was really good it a lot better than a lot of my work I kno that he will get out of everything okay and I'm here if you need me. 5/5 Caleb Hammett AKA UR BFF

  • 17 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Little long but Excellent poem (5/5)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyber Saiyan

    Great work; really well written.

    “Mistakes have been made for it's the humans way to sin” this seems mis-worded; out of place. Maybe “Mistakes have been made but it’s only human to sin”

    “To believe that everything was alright he simply refused” Again, this seemed a little mis-worded. It flows better if you use “he simply refused to believe that everything was alright” I know that does not fit the rhyme scheme, but it sounds better.

    I enjoyed the adjectives you used; like SHATTERED PAST, BRUTAL WORLD’S TRIAL, GLISTENING OFF HER FACE. These are descriptive and cannot be misinterpreted.

    Great use of more power words like CURSE, AGONY, PERFECTION.

    Overall; another really great song.

  • 17 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    5/5 very good word usage and beatifull 2

  • 17 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Wow your friggen amazing im like sitting here about to litterally cry, i dont usually do that....*sniffle*... ok um it had awsomly written flow and was clearly understandable.
    def. one of my favs---
    Raindrops 6/5 if i could

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