A Shadow In The Dark

by Poetic Tragedy08   Aug 7, 2007


In the shadows is where I see
A person who was all I meant to be

One who follows me with the wind
Whose eyes could make you cringe

You cannot look at him, for you cannot see
He knows everything, but can never leave

He will always try to enter your mind
And leave everything you have behind

This man was who I once saw my life
Who took everything out with his knife

But the sun slowly creeped from the sky
Leaving him in shadow to slowly die

There is nothing left but shame and regret
For his soul had nowhere to be met

I no longer try to see him as me
For he is nothing I wanted to be

I smile at the sun that left the shadow in dark
Where the man was left without a single mark

You started someone new
For that, I'd give my best for you

You began something few could do
For that, I'd give my life for you...

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Amazing work. My sister had a friend who did that to himself and he ended up dying. thats an amazing poem and i think you should seriously think about writing a poetry book. nice job once again.

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    This was written so well, i like the fact that each stanza has 2 lines it makes the poem unique
    i got a picture in my head while reading :P
    great work
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Imagery is superb and this poem is very unique. You wrote this poem excellently. This is your best poem that I read. I really like it, you created amazing atmosphere. It really deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I really enjoyed this poem I thought it was very unique from most others, the imagery was great and the flow as well. "but the sun slowly crept from the sky" other then that amazing job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was a beautifully written piece. it was very powerful and had a lot of emotions behind it. it was a lovely poem to read. nice work 5/5

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