Wonderful beginning

by Birgit   Aug 7, 2007


It's been a while since I've felt this way,
I'm not in love,
But I've got this feeling,
How dare I say;

You give me this feeling,
And it truly makes me smile,
It's just something,
I haven't felt in a while.

And I know I don't know you yet,
But every single second with you,
Is without a spark of regret,
And still full of temptation...

You told me I was beautiful,
And I didn't know what to do,
My cheeks turned red,
As I looked away from you.

But meanwhile,
I wanted still wanted to look at you,
But the colours of my cheeks, and the shyness of myself,
They didn't want me to.

"Don't look Birgit, don't look" it said.
But I wanted to, I truly did.
"Red, red, the colour of your head"
My mind was teasing me!

And after you left,
I just laughed for over thirty minutes,
Just smiling and thinking,
Oh, what a wonderful beginning.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Hey I really like this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    *little squeal*

    One of my favorites by you is this, Birgit! It's absolutely delightful to read. I personally can connect to its substance since I myself have experienced the same situation countless times already. Ah! See? Even your mind gets to tease you a lot. :) The ending part made my heart flutter. It's so cute.

    Love,
    Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Its great.............that senario is what i feel right now....

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Love this poem :)

    ashleigh

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Another wonderfully penned written piece Birgit. You're really improving =) I think the flow was smooth, I like the story behind it, good job. Also using the last words as the title is really effective.

    5/5