Deserted Kiss

by Jenni Marie   Aug 8, 2007


Frozen lips
Lonely hips
Tearstained eyes
Desperate cries
Empty, alone
Sadness grown
Love now lost
Most deadly cost
Crying lonely nights
Nothing is alright
Passion diminished
Love has finished
Time to choke
Heart has broke
Missing bliss
Deserted kiss

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  • 16 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    I so love short poems, this one is very well done. Very sad but so true.
    Peace and Blessings

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Amazing to read. Even though ever line was 2-3 lines the emotions where clear and deep and great rhyming.
    Impressing.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MizzCici

    I really like diz,great job.......

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    It was short but easily to see the emotions and how strong they were. 5/5
    Nicole

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Aweh. I liked it. The lines aren`t too long so that the reader gets bored and the wording that you used kept me interested. I do, however, feel that a little more grammar could help. You do have some, but I don`t know; it felt like something was missing is all. Anyways, great job Darling!

    5.5
    :]

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