Just a thought

A piece of gold, this is what I can say about your poem :) 5/5

Very deep and greatly written.
My favorite lines are:

-Love was given unto man
in hopes that he would understand.

The plan was to learn and know
to share and watch it grow.-

I like the rhythm of this poem.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

Very positive and interesting poem. Topic is good and you described emotions greatly. You really wrote this piece greatly, I like the ending. Third stanza is my favorite, well done! I enjoyed in this poem.

Wow, such a great poem!! I simply love it.

See the true beauty that life has to give
enjoy what you can long as you live.

And in the end you will find
love in your heart and peace in your mind.

Love these lines.. Great job!

Tracy
this is a very nice piece. Very uplifting.

And in the end you will find
love in your heart and peace in your mind.

It's a long hard battle to get to the end.
Take care Cindy