by StormyStar Aug 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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I once looked to you and you just pushed me away |
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Love this one, another amazing poem! 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
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I wasn't to keen on this. it didn't really make me feel any sort of emotion until the very last line. i thought you were holding back a little on this piece. however the end line...i adored that. i found it to have such great power and intensity. awesome ending. |
by xxSuicidalxx
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Beautiful poem! You really know how to write! Love it! |
by jLegendc
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For a young age.. u kno how to express ur feelings thru writing.. i wish all girls r lyk that.. =D GREAT JOB! |
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Your really good at this whole love poem thing... 5/5 |