My First Kiss

by Bre Monique   Aug 11, 2007


As we sat there and stared at the stars
You held me tight in your arms
I remember thinking things couldn't get any better
But I was ever so wrong

You looked into my eyes with such a passion I begin to shake
I remember you asking me if I was cold
I wasn't but I told you I was
Just so you could hold me even closer

And when you looked into my eyes
I remember wondering if this was really real
I had waited for this moment forever
I didn't know if I was about to wake up in my bed disappointed again

But I realized it was ever so real as I suddenly felt your lips on mine
And you promised me the world
With that first sweet tender kiss

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    The ending i think could have been said in a diffrent way but this poem had a great flow and strong words and emotions. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Leanette

    ITS R3AL CUT3 i WiSH MY FiRST KiSS WAS AS LiK3 THiS ... DARN L0L iTZ G00D

  • 16 years ago

    by Lola

    Omg wow,its sooo sweet,totally cute!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I really like the place where you had your first kiss. Anyway this was really sweet. Good job.

    Keep up the good work!