Across my door

by Meme   Aug 12, 2007


I was walking outside
Enjoying the cold breeze
He passed me with his ride
And I could feel my heart freeze

I was waiting for my friend
But she was unusually late
He passed me this time with intent
But I kept saying its fate

I came closer to the door
He stopped his bike for awhile
He dropped something on the floor
But I was so hypnotized by his style

Suddenly I saw my friends car
I wished she would go away
When he saw her he drove so far
And now am dreaming of him everyday

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© Copyright 2007 by: gIrL
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  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    That's kind funny but romantic at the same time

  • 16 years ago

    by peter

    You Can Always tell when some-one writes from the heart, I hope it wasn't too painful,

    Great!!!

    Regards

    Peter

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney

    Last stanza third line. should 'droved' be 'drove'?
    good poem.
    5/5
    *Brittney

  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Omg, once again, its good cause u wrote a poem about something that happens to people commonly =p it was cute!! ur amazing

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