Did you ((Song)),,*

by Catastrophic Beauty   Aug 12, 2007


This is the first song I've ever written so don't be too harsh :)

[Verse 1]
I gave you my everything
But everything wasn't enough
I can't bare being alone
I didn't think it'd be this tough
I wake up every morning
And see an empty space
Where you used to lay your head
A space I can't replace

[Chorus]
Did you hear my heart shatter
Was it blasting in your ears
'Cause you broke it to pieces
And you left me here in tears
Did you see where you dropped it
Saw it bleeding on the floor
You stomped on it and kicked it
And then came back for more

[Verse 2]
I wonder what I did wrong
Which part in this do I take
Reading every conversation
To see if I made a mistake
'Cause I can't find a reason
For why you wanted to quit
And I know you don't miss me
Not even a little bit

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
I don't know why you did this
Why did you break my heart
I never even hurt you
Never tore you apart

[Chorus x2]

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jess

    Its good! have confidence! dont stop writing! x

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    OH i LOVED this one
    look i don't even know the rhythem you have in mind for this song but you got me singing.
    5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    AN AMAZING SONG!!
    LOVE IT!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This is pretty excellent. Great rhyme and flow, I could definitely see this, or rather hear it, as a song. Wonderful write. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Excellent exept for: And you left me here in tears
    u should get rid of the here

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