Promise Me Forever

by Michelle18   Aug 12, 2007


Gently touch my hand,
And tell me that I'm safe.
Show me that this love,
Is destine to be faith.

Gaze into my eyes,
And softly kiss my lips.
As my gentle face,
Meets your fingertips.

Promise me forever,
And say you love me so.
Say you'll always be with me,
And never let me go.

Hold me close to your body,
And take my breath away.
Kiss me once more,
And say you're here to stay.

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  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Some thing can't be destined to be faith as faith is and emotion otherwise an excellent poem 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I think this is a super sweet love poem. You expressed the emotion beautifully. The flow was flawless and the rhymes were great. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh. this is sweet. im so glad you wrote this for me michelle! hahahaha just joking. lol. but i kinda wish bobby would do all this to me :[ anyways amazing poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well first of all.. This poem doesn't deserve to be down voted!

    Anyway it was a great poem, full of emotions in it, good job. I think everyone can relate to this.. 'hoping that their love ones will promise them they'll always be there'

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Awww, this is so cute. The rhyming was great and the flow was flawless.

    -Shannon <3

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