Would you

by heartbrk1   Aug 13, 2007


What would you do if you walked through the door and saw me on the floor with a empty bottle of pills in one hand and in the other a note that read help me?

would you cry because you knew that i was about to die

would you think it was a fake, a set up to to scare you, what a lie

would you say that i'll be fine or something stupid like when you get to hell drop me a line

would you understand that the pain i feel was for real and that i lied whenever i said its no big deal?

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Tyeah see that one is good, i like it when u write poetry like that, its so much more meaningful and powerful because you have talked about the feel and asked questions....so much better
    good but could have been into a real poem, and longer and have a story behind it

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    PleasE writE poemS anD wE wilL reaD..ratE anD commenT.. thiS 1 iS lovelY... 5/5

    thx....

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    So sad, yet so powerful. These words hold alot of emotion, ^^ so 5/5 i could picture this. great job. ^_^

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