Pinoccio

by Soulful Ensemble   Aug 13, 2007


I saw Pinocchio and he couldn't speak,
His face was tired and meek.
I offered him a drink and his knees got weak,
He was suspiciously cogent as he passed by me.

I said, " Hey, whats wrong?"
He said, " Nothing-- nothing at all."
And he kept walking toward the door,
As my head spun into the floor.

He went inside and saw Geppetto,
He told him I was drunk and real mellow.
And mentioned it was bad for him,
To be around guys like me.

"I want to be a real boy," he said,
"Not a wooden toy."
"I would really like to experience joy,"
"And to feel what it means to be coy."

Geppetto, he can't help at all,
He points to the door and says " good bye",
And whistles a song hes always known, to let the time pass by.
Pinocchio is out now, looking at the sky,
And with a somber face, he looks me in the eye.
I say nothing and he wonders why.

" I think I know what it feels like to be a real boy," he said,
"Its not as nice as I thought to employ."
"Maybe ill sit here and be a toy,
And do what everyone wants me to avoid".

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  • 16 years ago

    by Soulful Ensemble

    You are right, it is confusing, because of all the things I am trying to convey. Its about everything you said and more. Its also about how people want to better themselves but have no idea how, and the people who are supposed to be there for them are useless.

    Its also about how life can be so disappointing you wish you weren't a part of it.. and that is why Pinocchio gives up and doesn't want to be human anymore after realizing what emotional pain is like.

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Based from the titles of your poem it seems that you really love reading books and know more about different history, all of those were really interesting. But as of now, I'll read and comment on this one.

    This was a lovely poem and from the way i read it, it connotes different meanings. About how we wanted to try something else, try to be someone else and so on (correct me if i'm wrong). But actually, i have to read it twice coz it was really confusing.But it was really nice. keep it up!!