True Love (My unchangeable deem)

by Sumit Ojha   Aug 14, 2007


True love never
fades away with time
it became more
tasteful like wine
love is like a river
it's contain deepness

True love like
as water
colorless, shapeless
and flavorless
but it's vital
for life

True live is
A single soul in two bodies
one deem in two mind
never still
never die
and it's born, not made.

Like a rose, need water
Like a season, need change
Like a poet, need a pan
I need your blood!
Bloodsucking
is my true love

As you recognize
your blood is my true love
So, I want to hold you
N close to me and feel
Your Blood's heatness
... Before I suck it

Yes, it's my true love
In my life and death
If I'm an angle
than your blood is my heaven
In rise and set
and it's my unchangeable deem

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  • 14 years ago

    by january friend

    "Like a rose, need water
    Like a season, need change"
    -i love the symbolism you used here, for me, the most powerful lines of the entire poem. the ending is great. i loved the flow over, you did a great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Very nice write. I think that you could have done a better job with the grammar, but other than that it was great. So I'll give it a 4/5. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    The beginning of your poem was strong as you used many metaphors and similies, but as it progressed on it became a little far fetched. Otherwise, it was a good poem. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alone in the crowd

    It was good

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great write , wonderfully written and very deep and word choice was good, I liked this piece, great job... your friend Tracy d,,

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