My Love

by amber   Aug 15, 2007


You are my love, my hope, my everything,
my inspiration, my dream, you chase my
fears away, my body and soul sing.
You make my lonely heart beat, don't deny
me your love, your heart, your soul, your body.
Don't you know that we should be together.
Forever, till death do us part. We will be
forever together, forever together
I know this is very hard to believe.
I know that this is hard for you to see.
But I beg of you, my love, please don't leave
because I know that this was meant to be.
Please don't run, come to me, your destiny.
I know now together we will be.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like it. Sorry but I really don't like your poems. This one reminds me one your others.

  • 18 years ago

    by Adelle

    Your flow is a little off in this poem, however it has a good theam.

  • 18 years ago

    by Colourful Mind

    Love it x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Raven

    I dont like rebecca -_-
    I thnk she could be a lil nicer up on this stuffs -_-.
    I Like this one. Its really good hon.
    The flow was a little off but everyone has flaws and all
    Great Job :)

    4/5

    ~Mz.Raven

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It was short and sweet, yet the flow wasnt perfect and some parts seemed a little forced. But i really did think it has potential. well done
    love Tara-Kay
    x

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