Dear Dad,please stop lying.Disappointment hurt us.

by ShootingStar   Aug 16, 2007


Dear dad,
I'm your daughter.I'm 14 now.I'm so appreciated you gave me life.Being your daughter for 14yrs.My life had changed a lot. Still remember when I was a little kid,our living environment is well. I don't remember many things about you. Cause all what you knew is just earn money. I'm appreciate that. I was so lonely. Still remember once,my first performance when i was 4. You promised me you will be there and support me. The day had came,I did so well on the stage.When I looked down on the seat,no one was there. You said you had to deal with business stuff. I cried for a night. You promised me to buy me a doll. Still you didn't. Now,you seem forgot.
Once,you said you'll pick me up after school. Did you know I waited for a day. My friends stared at me. I was afraid. I kept calling you and no one answered the phone.You did a huge mistake. You met her. Mom fell to pieces. We moved. Life changed. You had to work so hard. My 7th birthday,you promised me to buy me a best gift ever. Yes,you forgot. After that,every birthday of mine you were always busy. You promised me I'll have a birthday party on beach. It's the day,you forgot. I waited for so long. I promised you I'll get the best mark. I did it. And now,my birthday passed. You're in your office again. You promised us to bring us to a trip. So then,it canceled...

Dad,stop lying to us.Yes,I remember all of those. Do you know before it,I was so excited for it. Then,you broke your promises. Tons of. Disappointment kill me.I'm so disappointed. Please don't make any stupid promise again.I'm so over now.I'm not a lil'girl anymore.

*Sorry,it's so long.Cuz the past minute he broke another again. I cried so hard. I wrote this. Hope you guys like it:)*

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  • 16 years ago

    by sarah

    Wow.That's really good.I know how you feel my dad left my mom when he found out that my mom was pregnant with me.I've tried finding him but I guess he just doesn't want to be found.I'm going to let him find me.Here's a little advice never let anybody tell you they are going to do something with you wait until it happens then make a comment on it.have a good year.Happy New Year!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    Really well written 5/5 from me