Got to go (404)

by NinjaGirl   Aug 17, 2007


It's unexpected, I know
But I feel something for you
I know it seems I just enjoy being
Annoying, from your point of view...

But there is something different
Behind this smile, you'll find
Something running deeper
In my soul, heart and mind.

I dream of you so close to me
You are my "Falsetto"
But in real life you won't even look at me
So I guess that it's time to go...

But before I leave, there are things I've got to say
Things that are important, well, to me anyway
Before you leave me alone again, Falsetto
I need to say I love you, but sorry, I have to go...

I hope you understand...

~ "Falsetto" refers to Jason ~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

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    diS iS..... luzaN

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    Nawwww I find this poem to be very touching and quite cute, but also kinda sad =(
    5/5
    Your poems are improving ^.^ Are you going to become a poet?

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Good job!

    But there is something different
    Behind this smile, you'll find
    Something running deeper
    In my soul, heart and mind.

    This stanza really stands out.
    Keep writing.
    Take Care Cindy

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