Is it a crime? (405)

by NinjaGirl   Aug 17, 2007


Is it a crime to
Smile? Be happy once in a while?

Is it a crime to
Be alive? To be able to survive?

Is it a crime to
Cry? To live life in a lie?

Is it a crime to
Hide? Or in poetry confide?

Is it a crime to
Love? Or to like or to hug?

Is it a crime to
Live my life?

No, it's a crime that
You watch my strife,

And don't try to help,
A crime is nothing else...

But what you are and
Apprarently

What I am
Not...

©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angel

    Lovely!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    Mmm... This poem is quite meaningful and the words fit perfectly with each other.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on this piece. Very sad.

    Is it a crime to
    Hide? Or in poetry confide?

    Nice lines. I think we all pour ourselves out in our poetry.
    Good job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats a good message inside this, well done xxx